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Post by Fanatic(nicktheww2fanatic) on Oct 19, 2007 9:32:40 GMT -5
8 o'clock at night. Time to start. As I lay there with blood dripping from my wound, I tried to remember.
We had dashed forward, trying to locate the enemy. All we could see was the one light on the outside of the milkhouse. We knew they were there, but still couldn't see them. We made our way to the wall of the milkhouse, and there paused, we could hear a slight russling noise.
One of my squad mates, opened the window, and started spraying the inside of the room with his M16. We moved. At the door, I kicked it open, to discover mayhem.
It was the guy behind the desk, had to be. I didn't see anyone else.
I moved three feet into the room as the last bark of the M16 fell silent. The room was full of the sound of shatterng glass, and falling debris. Still no sign of the enemy. I kicked open the door to the office, and felt about six bullets slam into my torso.
It hurts...where's that medic...
As I lay on the ground, I could hear the firefight 3 feet above my head. I heard an AK bark one last time, and the enemy fell forward onto the desk, his weapon falling onto my legs.
My squad mate called a medic for me, but said it would be a while, and moved on to clear the rest of the building.
I hear someone coming...
Sporadic firing could be heard for about 5 minutes, it felt much longer. then all was silent.
Is it the medic? Wait, its more then one.
The door opened, and an AK spat a single bullet.
What did we do wrong....
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Post by 2nd LT. RedGunn on Oct 19, 2007 16:51:25 GMT -5
Not to bad, maybe go into more detail, like when you said you got shot. Maybe say more about what it was like (Life flashed before my eyes etc.) instead of just saying it hurt. Overall not to bad.
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Post by Big Boss on Oct 19, 2007 20:48:16 GMT -5
Where the hell was this??
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Post by Fanatic(nicktheww2fanatic) on Oct 19, 2007 21:44:49 GMT -5
hehe...it was at my buddy's farm...I'll be working on this later
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